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Re: The Graidient
« Reply #60 on: October 07, 2009, 08:26:23 pm »
more wildlife

khryloth:

at around 2 meters tall, the Khryloth is a significan beast.
this creature need the small, sparse shrubs to supply nutrients unavalable to it naturaly. because it is unable to physicaly gather much of this, it has devised and interesting feeding method.
it decends into the subterainian realm. there, it gathers vast ammounts of cephlapod-like creatures. on the surface, it realeases the creatures onto the small shrubs. needing water and food, the creatures soon eat the plants. then the Khryloth eats them.


yes, all the animals so far (including the graid) are from the same class. hence the armor and the pair of tenticle-things they all have around their head. its a sensory organ, which allows them to detect organisms.
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Re: The Graidient
« Reply #61 on: October 07, 2009, 10:35:04 pm »
Oh, I see, so that's why they all look similar.

I like these, especially the khryloth. :) It's interesting how they get their daily nutrient requirements by farming the cephlapod looking things. I guess they're pretty numerous for their size, seeing as they have a stable food supply, unlike others which have to hunt for their food.

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Re: The Graidient
« Reply #62 on: October 10, 2009, 12:02:41 am »
here is an example of the subterrainial life:
braegchos

this creature is the master of exploiting the darkness of the depths. this beast strides tall across the murky underground. its huge abdomen is gorged full of decay. the braegchos will wander , while smaller creatures will nibble on its hanging abdomen, thinking it an easy meal. however, the abdomen is covered in a sticky, globulus substance. they will be stuck to the skin, and digested through it. this then adds to the stench of meat, attracting more creatures to their doom.

next i'll cover language and naming. but thats alot of work that will have little interest
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Re: The Graidient
« Reply #63 on: October 10, 2009, 12:17:29 am »
This guys really knows how to get food in the easiest ways possible.

I like their style! :D :)

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Re: The Graidient (the lobster poets)
« Reply #64 on: November 09, 2009, 06:37:25 pm »
eh?
Goddamnit kitkat, you make me look late
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Re: The Graidient (the lobster poets)
« Reply #65 on: November 09, 2009, 07:24:50 pm »
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Re: The Graidient (the lobster poets)
« Reply #66 on: November 09, 2009, 07:40:21 pm »
I thought you misspelled something.
Goddamnit kitkat, you make me look late
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Re: The Graidient (the lobster poets)
« Reply #67 on: November 11, 2009, 03:46:21 pm »
erasucus
(image removed, cause I replaced it)
cause I realized I needed a bad-guy

oh, and to match my current desighn, i'll go back and edit the stories to flow better and be relavent. for the two people who read them
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Re: The Graidient (the lobster poets)
« Reply #68 on: November 14, 2009, 12:20:00 am »
I'll be watching how you introduce these villains.

I really hope some of them make their third arm into a projectile launcher. That would be awesome! 8)

Will be checkin' out the revised versions once they're done. :)

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Re: The Graidient (the lobster poets)
« Reply #69 on: November 14, 2009, 10:25:59 am »
actualy, erasucus is an individual with the third limb, not a species.
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Re: The Graidient
« Reply #70 on: December 12, 2009, 12:18:32 am »
a creature from the poles
Yrasslar

the largest creature within the region (about the size of an apatosaurus) , the yrasslar has difficulty sustaining itself, especially in dark, cold areas of the planet where is lives. therefore, it relies on its weaker offspring to provide for it. the great beast itself mostly functions simply to make more underlings.

its brood:

for an offspring to grow into an adult, it would need to consume the mass of one, meaning new adults usually can only form when one dies.
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Re: The Graidient
« Reply #71 on: December 15, 2009, 05:07:08 pm »
Nice. 8)

I like how the Acharah looks. It's like some convoluted offspring of a xenomorph.

I also like how you made the complete maturation of the Yrasslar juvenile to be possible only if an adult dies. It adds to the feeling of scarcity one finds in the dark side. :)

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Re: The Graidient
« Reply #72 on: December 15, 2009, 09:58:18 pm »
back to underground creatures:

Bruach

a small, unintelligent bottom-feeder of the underground.

(wow. second non-hunter in a row. I realized there was a rather large imbalance.)

Ezaluthm
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a larger relative of the ezgul, that is known to travel even to the sunless side.

(by the way, genes operate at a much more on the physical outside form than the details and innards. thats why creatures can be related but have such radically different body shapes. they change quite greatly externally, but remain roughly the same animal)
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Re: The Graidient
« Reply #73 on: December 16, 2009, 09:37:29 pm »
I see.

Kinda like the more simple creatures in our planet's oceans. :)

I was also kinda wondering about that a bit. Thanks for clearing that up. :)

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Re: The Graidient
« Reply #74 on: December 19, 2009, 09:43:45 pm »
alright. I'm going make an RP featuring these guys (in the future, when they have space travel); a short introduction one.

would any (thats directed at others, not reading this, cause only two people look at this thread) of you  actually bother with it? probably not. so ill leave once it fails. unless it doesn't
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