Author Topic: The Alliance’s attempt to stop the Execution of Jago and Kowa - Very Short RP  (Read 5958 times)

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OK I need to close the day so I leave this to you Daan and Jack :). Try and make the story interesting, realistic and balanced factionaly at the same time :). Take your time debate about this and then write the final version of what happened.

Basic Conditions:
Emperor Shio Nihon mustn’t be harmed
President Casha mustn’t be harmed.
Emperor Shio Nihon must stab his young brother Kowa before Kowa will be taken (not necessarily means Kowa will die).
Don’t kill too many guards or make total chaos. Do it secretly.
Both sides must have a few loses.
It is better that one of the prisoners would die, but not necessary.

The Set (And how things would have gone without interfering):
The execution will be held in the Urshans capitol, Nihon. Many formal guests will arrive including the new president of the Thoons Casha. The ceremony won’t be too grand but will be covered by GNN with a few reporters. Armed JusticeBringers and Thoon troopers will bring the two prisoners into the stage. Kowa will be much more guarded.
First Jago will be set down; he will then give the following speech:
“Members of this universe, members of my race, of my union I first would like to apologies to you. I sacrificed my relatives for strangers, but I did it without hesitation. I am guilty for this crime and therefore my punishment is just. But please understand I did it because I care for this universe and seek peace. I hope the next generations would see my actions were right and my name will be mentioned as one that fought for peace”
Then he will be injected with the lethal poison and die in about 10 seconds silently.
Next Kowa will be brought in front of the Emperor. The Emperor will step before him and say: “Dear brother, you have betrayed you empire and your brother. With the intensions of diplomacy and peace you have brought havoc and damage in times of war. I must sentence you to death. Kowa won’t even have the chance to speak as the Emperor will pierce though his chest with his lengthened spear-claw. He will then weep silently for a few second and say “Victory for the Empire! Victory for the Union!”

Good luck guys :). Any questions?
« Last Edit: January 27, 2007, 03:17:01 am by BioCat »



Offline Jack Zetter

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Ill be going to bed soon, so I don’t think I can do it today, But I would Imagine that One ore more, of the guards are Spec-Ops, and that one of them will set off some sort of Stun-Flash grenade right when the emperor stabs Kowa!

Ill think about it, I hope to come up with something cool

Good night!  :)

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I should have went to bed an hour ago, but I'll think something up. I will take control over the Urshans, if that is ok.

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Sure no problem. This could be fun :P. See you tomorrow.

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OOC: Uh, what time zone are you guys in? It's 4 in the afternoon here...

Anyways, the Zyther have not yet revealed a cloaking device that has been installed on a small but fast ship for getting Kowa and Jago away from the Union. In keeping with their promise to stay out of Union territory, they have donated the ship to the Wexxian for the mission. It is currently waiting in the atmosphere above Nihon.

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Its 1 am here! Thanks for the ship!


Two Spec-Ops could be involved in the rescue.

Firstly they knock a couple of guards unconscious and take their forms to infiltrate the building the execution is happening in.

One of them could switch the poison, there is to be used to kill Jago, with a placebo of some sort!

The other would set of a Stun-flash devise at the moment Kowa is about to be stabbed. Fire some stun-bolts at the guards (Maybe even stun the Emperor, just to show the Union, that they are damn lucky that the Wexxians are hippies!). Kowa would still be hit by the spear.

The Spec-Ops jump in grab Kowa and Jago. And use the confusion to escape (possibly by blasting a hole in the floor!)

They still have to escape the building and the planet, but I’m working on it!

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No, no. That's good. We don't want to plan EVERYTHING out, do we? :P

Offline Josasa

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You kind of have to, otherwise Biocat won't let it go forward.

Instead of poison, what if the spec-ops switch it with a mild sedative, so it looks like he's actually 'dead' giving the spec-ops more time to act?

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Hehe that is very interesting. This turned out to be like some kind of riddle.

Anyway no I think shocking the Emperor is a little too much :). I think it is better that they will pick Kowa up after he was stabbed and try to heal him in the spaceship later. I like the sedative idea though, that could work with a little fixes.

Also to make it as realistic as you can at list one thing in your plan must go wrong, so think about it as well.

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The ship's cloaking fails as soon as they get aboard. Ths means they can run but not hide.

Anything else that could fail?

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I cant think of a way that the escape from the building, could anything but fail! but Im sure they arent getting out of there without a fight!  :)

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Any ideas for a final version?

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My idea on Kowa:

The Emperor gives some insults to Kowa, and curses his soul. He stabs Kowa, but in his sadness of killing his brother, he slightly trembles and slices off Kowa's arm. Spec-Ops fall in and hit Shio in the head. The Wexxians use some miraculous device to teleport Kowa away, neglecting to kidnap Shio.

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Hit the Emperor in the head! Well I am desperate, this is taking way too long :). I don't want it to end when the war ends. So we just a need a clear version of what happened in the end. Jack?

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Telleportation is way too easy, and the building could be shielded!

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They need to run into trouble, Ideas please!

Characters:

Wicto-Enon-15-01 “Wosco” and Wicto-Enon-15-02 “Jalac” (That’s right, they are brothers!)

The two brothers both showed great promise in the Spec-Ops program and was both granted the most honourable and extreme task a Spec-Op can get; Undercover assignment.

They have been stationed in Nihon for seven years. Wosco works in a School where he teaches Philosophy and Xeno biology. Jalac is a mechanic.

Their assignment is usually to lay low, keep an eye out, and protect the public from dangers if they can. In this case they got orders from Axon, “Rescue Jago the Thoon before he gets executed.”
 

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Well perhaps the plan itself can change. Maybe the way the execution would be conducted was changed in the last minute and the Wexxian intelligent didn't know about it. That could create a serious tackle.

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Well perhaps the plan itself can change. Maybe the way the execution would be conducted was changed in the last minute and the Wexxian intelligent didn't know about it. That could create a serious tackle.

Sounds good. Much more plausible than anything else.

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Are the prisoners going to escape here?

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The alliance insists on trying to save them, and I am so kind hearted I agreed. Most probably only Jago would make it, but lets wait and see what's Jack's plan is.
(He better come up with one before the war is over :) )

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Well if they do i intend on an arkibal Interceptor force engaging the ship ferrying them, just for one last chance.

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Well perhaps the plan itself can change. Maybe the way the execution would be conducted was changed in the last minute and the Wexxian intelligent didn't know about it. That could create a serious tackle.

Im sure the Wexxians where put of by that stabing of Kowa!

I thought that the alarm will go off after the snach Jago (and perhaps Kowa) and that their escape would be stoped by miletary or police on the streets outside. and that they will have to get to the top floor and acros to another building (One with some sort of subway) to escape.

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Um, we really better get this moving. We need to finish this before the war is over.

Any other questions problem or suggestions, or is it ready to go guys?

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Ok Ill try

The Rescue attempt of Jago the Thoon

Location: The Urshan Capital; Nihon.


Wosco walked through the streets of the capital, he had lived there for some years now and it had become a home for him.
He opened up a com with his brother Jalac.

//I’m entering the building in two micro time units!//

//I’m already inside, I knocked out a guard and stole his appearance. He is okay, but he is going to have a big headache in the morning… how about you?//

//Why didn’t you use your Pulse Gun to stun him? Anyway… I’m “covering” for a GNN reporter who couldn’t make it to the execution! //

//Stun him… where’s the fun in that? How often go we get to hit people? //

{Shees, that boy is a half Torpal} Wosco thought as he walked up the stairs of the building.
Inside, a big security guard checked his ID card before escorting him to a waiting room.

And Wosco waited… and smiled slightly… the guard had not discovered that the fancy briefcase he carried was in fact a camouflaged Ionic Pulse Rifle.

To be continued…

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Oops didn't see you posted, it's been a while now.

We will be kind of busy with the war, so you prefer to write a short version of it and it would be agreed that Jago was rescued and Kowa died in action? I kind of wanted Jago to be on your side in this war but it seems he wont have the chance :).

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Well youre right!

I got a lot on my mind at the moment: school! (Danm it)

I wil see if I can write a short version.

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Jalac gets the poison switched with a knock-out drug. He and Wosco manage to save Jago and Kowa from execution. They get away from the guards, but find that they can’t escape from the building, as the authorities has surrounded the building… they make it by going to the top floor and using their shape shifting abilities they jump to another building or their stealth ship pick them up.

I that ok?

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Sure, Jago is saved by the alliance and because the current Thoon government will not accept him and wish he dead he is kept by the Wexxians as thier guest. Meanwhile Kowa thanks the Wexxians and promiss to help them while one night he escapes to the unknown (underground Urshan politics as ally of Kan To).