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Offline PatMan33

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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #30 on: August 17, 2006, 05:39:23 pm »
Yeah... sorry to complain to you again, Shadow... but you know... the spelling...  :D

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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #31 on: August 17, 2006, 05:42:44 pm »
Oh man.  I am looking foward to seeing where this goes.  I used to be hooked on RPing on Star Wars and Lord of the Rings forums and stopped.  I fear I'm falling back into it...

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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #32 on: August 17, 2006, 05:45:02 pm »
Yeah the same thing happened to me...

Anyway, I will put my new post up in about an hour.

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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #33 on: August 17, 2006, 08:55:25 pm »
i checked my spelling not my fault
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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #34 on: August 17, 2006, 09:17:27 pm »
Then its okay then.

That's all we can ask you to do.



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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #35 on: August 18, 2006, 12:14:27 pm »
I knew I would be safe because they were looking for a blonde haired main named Ryan Simmons, not a brown haired man named Kevin Ott. As an insurance policy the two men I hired knew me as Ryan Simmons. You never know who you can and can't trust.

I think you have a discrepency.. the boys were calling you Kevin in the beginning

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"Hey Kevin, what time is it?" Called out a voice from behind me.

"Hmm... it looks to be about noon time, we had better hurry!" I said. I rubbed my eyes. Why did I just look right into the sun? That was stupid.

"H-hey Kevin, can we go over the plan one more time?" Called out another voice from behind me.

also.. its not stirrups.. they would be spurs.. big difference  ;)

As he rode past the saloon, Priest realized that he was very thirsty and dismounted, hitching his horse and stepping up on the porch.  He walked into the saloon, and the clicking of his stirrups against the wood caused several people looked up to see him enter. 

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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #36 on: August 18, 2006, 01:39:59 pm »
Well we can just pretend that never happened.


But I fixed it anyway.  :P
« Last Edit: August 18, 2006, 01:45:40 pm by PatMan33 »

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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #37 on: August 18, 2006, 04:52:04 pm »
Oh yea thanks Lady M... Now trying to picture that it would look pretty funny  :D

And shadowlord I understand that you may have used spell check, but the usage of the words was wrong so I offered to correct it.  If you look back, you can just copy and paste the one i typed up over the post.  Also, if you've been having trouble with the spell check picking it up, you could type it up on word/publisher if you like since it picks up sentence structure.

As for the posting, I'm not quite sure how to post in right now so lets just assume I'm off doing something...
« Last Edit: August 18, 2006, 04:59:47 pm by gutwrencher89 »

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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #38 on: August 18, 2006, 05:15:32 pm »
To Shadow's credit, I do not think his English is very strong.


Right, so Shadow, you know you are chasing my alias, right? Just want to check to make sure.
« Last Edit: August 18, 2006, 05:20:55 pm by PatMan33 »

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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #39 on: August 18, 2006, 05:29:40 pm »
oh yea...I didnt consider that.  If thats the case...never mind cause I couldn't do this in spanish (the only other language I know a little bit of)

Ok I don't feel like waiting.  I wanna get in on Krakow's brawl...  :D

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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #40 on: August 18, 2006, 06:27:24 pm »
I am making my post now so hold up a bit while I write it.  ;)

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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #41 on: August 18, 2006, 07:43:57 pm »
To Shadow's credit, I do not think his English is very strong.


Right, so Shadow, you know you are chasing my alias, right? Just want to check to make sure.

yeah i am chasing your alias which will eventually lead to at a guess English is OK with me it just i can't spell if we where to talk you find that I'm quite able to put my points across i all so read really well  but i am using spell check allot these days
« Last Edit: August 18, 2006, 07:46:20 pm by shadowlord18 »
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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #42 on: August 18, 2006, 07:49:12 pm »
I dont mean to be annoying, but I think it would be easier for the readers if you fixed the spelling errors on your post...I'll correct it for you if you want.

John had his hat pulled low as he rode into a small town on his horse the sheriff sent for him a few days ago. He did not know why he was here, but it could not be good if the sheriff wanted the best assassin in the west. His gun was at his side as always.

Also, I'm not really sure who the sheriff is bringing you in for, but he doesn't know that the bank robbery is going to happen ahead of time (i think, maybe if he does have a little explanation about how).
becuse i figured that his guy had done other thing using his alias
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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #43 on: August 18, 2006, 07:58:25 pm »
Alright cool... so they're basically chasing Pat's character, and in this town they kind of catch up

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Re: I'm Going Into the Story: Wild West Style! (Out of Character)
« Reply #44 on: August 18, 2006, 08:08:31 pm »
more or less
Life is not measured by the amount of times you fall down but by the number of times you get back up again.