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New Creature - The Burinee
« on: June 12, 2006, 01:10:56 pm »
Ok, i tried a little bit harder this time on drawling the creature. My main creature is still going to be the Peskitoriantais, but this guy has a much more simpler name to type in and i like how i drew it a little more. These guys are amphibions but mostly stay in water, but do come and bathe on the sand to get some sun.
They live on the same planet as the Peskitoriantais, but they do not know of them because the Burinee's usually stay far in the depths of the seas.

So without futher a dew, here it is: (i hope you can see it well in the middle, it seems it was sort of cut)



I will post the culture and ways of life and their evolution later, but just enjoy the picure right now, and of course it isnt as good as Hydros, but still comment and suggestions would be nice. ;D

EDIT:

I added this picture just so you can see what type of colors im going for. Hope you like:

« Last Edit: June 12, 2006, 05:12:49 pm by Netherflare »


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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #1 on: June 12, 2006, 01:47:42 pm »
sounds like a very cool creature but do you think you could maybe rescan the drawing? because i can't see the middle at all and the other lines are very faint, or maybe you could outline it in some sort of painting program

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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #2 on: June 12, 2006, 02:05:17 pm »
Ok, im updating now cause i have nothing else better to do today, so ill go over his body parts:

Mouth:


Now, what is so special about these creatures is that they can spit venom from their "Venom Muscle" right at the top of the mouth. This is good when they are trying to blind any nearby fish or other underwater critters. But because of their speed, they may not need this attribute to their evolution because they are very fast. But the venom has about a 50ft range or attack.

The fangs on the top and the bottom form a cage when the jaws are closed, to insure that no creature can get in, or out. The teeth are extremely sharp and can easily penetrate through human skin without even moving.

The tongue is probably the most important part that lets the species live. Because the Burinee are blind, the tongue leads as a guider to the rest of the sea and ocean. It feels around for any unbalanced speed patterns in the water to tell if a fish is nearby, that is when he uses the venom.

Now just like every other mouth, there is a throat the have to food go down into. But this throat may look normal, but if you go into it, it leads to 3 different tubes. 1 is for breathing on the surface to the lungs, 1 is to go through the digestive track, and the 3rd is to go into a little storage system for hibernation.

Rest of Body

Now, there are also many other unique qualities also, like they have 2 hearts. Because if they are in a very intense cold spot in the water, the second heart can speed up and pump more blood throughout the body to keep it warm. The hearts are also there because if one fails for unknown causes, the other one can step right in to take its place.

Now the 2 fin like hands play a role to get from one place to the other, and they do it very very well. Over many generations, the hands have frown bigger for a greater propelness in and out of the water, or to escape enimies that are unknown to them for right now.

The tail is a little bit of a helper to get through the water, but it plays a role to kill bigger creatures then the venom, it just electricutes them to death, and it is better than a microwave. It gets the job done alot faster and can manipulate to the maximum of 100000000 volts of electricity. The rest of the Burinee are immune to the zapping though.

There is no such thing as a girl Burinee or a boy Burinee, it is just a Burinee. Near the tail, there is a system to produce eggs and sperm to carry and create living organisms. Now the process usually goes on between the hibernation phase which is durring the summer time, the is why the food storage system connects to the eggs center to carry food for them, and the Burinee while in a sleep mode.

The eyes are there, but just cant see. When the planet of Nairot was hit with the devastating attack of the meteors, it filled the water with dirt so it was very hard to see. And over time, they adapted to the tongues more than the eyes so there gone.



So there is a sort of quick update

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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #3 on: June 12, 2006, 02:06:05 pm »
sounds like a very cool creature but do you think you could maybe rescan the drawing? because i can't see the middle at all and the other lines are very faint, or maybe you could outline it in some sort of painting program

sure, it will be up in 5 minutes
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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #4 on: June 12, 2006, 02:15:10 pm »
Are they sapient?
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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #5 on: June 12, 2006, 02:15:49 pm »
i hope that is better ;D
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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #6 on: June 12, 2006, 02:16:42 pm »
Are they sapient?
wow, i was totally off, i was thinking serpent. here i go at round 2 (EDIT)

They do have technology, and they are alot smarter than the Peskitoriantais. They have colonies underwater and thrive pretty nicely. The Burinee brains are pretty complex and i will diagram that later. Im working on culture right now, and i think it is going to be pretty good.  ;D
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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #7 on: June 12, 2006, 02:20:11 pm »
They are Cool!  ;)

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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #8 on: June 12, 2006, 02:23:20 pm »
They are Cool! ;)

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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #9 on: June 12, 2006, 04:14:57 pm »
now for culture:

Culture

The culture is somewhat like "Harmolity", except there is no peace in it toward other creatures except to their own Burinee. So in other words, if you are near a Burinee, run as fast as you can, but do that very slowly or the tongue will detect movement. Because of the finds the bare, they are the fastest creature in the sea.

The religion that they praise is called "Hoseath", meaning hostile and death. So prepare for a brutal beating if you get near them. The mind of the Burinee's is very complex and is split up into 3 parts. Logical, Warfare, and the controlling of the rest of the body. For example; When a foreign creature approaches, the warfare part of the mind immediately takes over the brain and attacks the animal. When another Burinee is in trouble, the logical part of the mind takes over. And when they need to take a dump, the other part of the mind takes over.

Now, this 3 parted mind was created all the way back to the greatest grand Burinee when all the creatures on Nairot were being created. The other cells were a little faster at gathering and eating the food, so they evolved faster and left the ocean quicker. Because of that, it decided to stay permanently in the water. So when it was only the Burinee left, it felt abandoned from the other creatures and was left with alot of fury that had to be released. So it ate and ate and ate so fast that its evolution sped up quicker than any of the other organisms. So its warfare part of the mind was created because it feels that no one gave mercy to them, so no mercy to anything else. And once it evloved to its present state of being, it is now learning how to progress further down the road to the highest evolutionary chain.

When the Burinee's celebrate, it isnt because it is someones birthday, or someones wedding, it is because something died. There is a daily report toward the end of the day when the whole town goes to the center of the city, and they read of all the things that has happened. This would include either a new race has been wiped out from in the water, or if we are progressing the takeover of the other side of Nairot which is in control by the Trelleps, a race that is a mix of crap, horse and squid. The war has been lasting almost 90 years, and will continue for a very long time since the Trelleps do follow the "Harmolitive" way, and since the Burinee's go for the "Hoseath", it is kind of a war that will never end.




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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #10 on: June 13, 2006, 12:55:41 pm »
The War

Between the Trelleps and the Burinee's, it has never been an easy "friendship". The one thing that got in the way between them is the religion factor. Because the Burinee's believe in killing and only killing, once they saw a Trellep, they watned to kill it. Since the Trelleps believe in Harmolity, they must destroy anything that shows aggression toward them, and the Burinee's have.

The advantages the Burinee's have is that they can multiply realy quickly because with their brain they can command when to have a baby. Their venom is also a vital tool to kill the prey along with their electrical tail. The speed plays an important role to get away or dodge an attack from the Trelleps.

The Trelleps also have some pretty useful advantages. They have their mighty claws that can easily penetrate through the thin skin of the Burinee's. The tentacles have become an insulator in the shocking of the Burinee's tail. And the Trelleps have a nice overcoat have rough skin that can sometimes keep the venom out.

The defence units that surround the base of the Burinee home city are vaporizing guns that with one shot can dissolve a whole lifeform and turn them into little molecules of matter. They are on the verge of the space age, and once they hit that point in time, the Trelleps would easily be destroyed. Some of the Burinee's have left the water and become a land animal now known as Aecivo. But with the newer technology comming out, there is certainly hope soon enough that these creatures will make land and cause choas to all before them.

Here is a picture of a few things they do while fighting:

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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #11 on: June 13, 2006, 01:12:30 pm »
Cool pick!  :D Nice!

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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #12 on: June 14, 2006, 04:59:15 am »
Very nice creature, and the skeleton is very good as well.

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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #13 on: June 14, 2006, 07:59:08 am »
Very nice creature, and the skeleton is very good as well.

thanks you 2, im going to try and make the planet of Nairot, but i dont have photoshop 7 and i dont plan on paying money for it.

But im drawling the solar system right now.
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Re: New Creature - The Burinee
« Reply #14 on: June 15, 2006, 09:38:00 am »
Ok, here is the Iskep Solor System where the Burinee and the the Peskitoriantais live

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