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how good is this?

I mean. . . WOW, fantastic!
1 (6.7%)
i suppose its good,
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i dunno, give me a better picture!
4 (26.7%)
it could be better
3 (20%)
it makes me sick to my stomach!
1 (6.7%)

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Voting closed: April 06, 2006, 03:29:29 am

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Offline Brutus

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bred for one purpose
« on: April 01, 2006, 01:40:04 am »
here is my creature, over the centuries they have become bitter, and cruel as any diplomatic relations have always abruptly ended in war, war is all they have known, they have never had a succesful long term alliance in their history, and they have decided that the other species of the galaxy are to blame even though there species has been in constant civil war through tribal stages.They only united because of one "man" (the player ofcourse) who conquered all the other settlements with his army in city stage.

still bothered by sepretists wanting independace from the empire, they've set out to destroy all others not of their kind, they have abandoned all other things and they all focus soley on war. They do not know of art, philosophy , games, poetry or anyother "waste of time" they research weapons and defensive structures only, their citys are very metalic and most importantly Effieciant as there weapons are designed for functionality not to be aesthetically pleasing.

They are build with a sort of centaur like build with four legs and two arms but they resemble a bird of prey in some ways, even though the have no wings, think, centaur/Griffin, heres a quick thing i peiced together. 




CORWINII (caw-win-e-eye)



 they  look like this except they are more muscualar and bulky
« Last Edit: April 01, 2006, 03:30:01 am by Brutus_ »


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Re: bred for one purpose
« Reply #1 on: April 01, 2006, 03:20:12 am »
Nice picture but you have to write more than one incredibly long unbroken sentence beacuse it gets kind of hard to read after the fourth or fifth clause not to mention after ten of them as you can see here in my own sentence which I intend to write at least as long as yours to get my point across to you so that you divide the text into something easier to read and so that I can inform you that the image link only leads to iamgeshacks's start page. Thank you.

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Re: bred for one purpose
« Reply #2 on: April 01, 2006, 04:16:18 am »
there ya go.
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Re: bred for one purpose
« Reply #3 on: April 01, 2006, 01:56:21 pm »
i can read it quite easily. i didn't even notice the lack of periods.
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Re: bred for one purpose
« Reply #4 on: April 02, 2006, 09:06:22 am »
but what about my creature?
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Re: bred for one purpose
« Reply #5 on: April 02, 2006, 09:17:57 am »
It's an interesting creature. Instead of horse head it has bird head. I picture of the actual creature, not just skeletal structure would be nice.

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Re: bred for one purpose
« Reply #6 on: April 02, 2006, 09:21:20 am »
sorry but i havnt really got an idea of how fur/ fathes will go and i'm only good at drawing if i spend hours and hourses drawing it with a trail and error way, all i can provide is the skeletal structure until some benevolant person draws it for me :)
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Re: bred for one purpose
« Reply #7 on: April 02, 2006, 09:23:31 am »
I can't draw well either so I understand. ;) Look forward to seeing it when you find someone to draw it.

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Re: bred for one purpose
« Reply #8 on: April 02, 2006, 09:29:27 am »
thx but i am a bit stuck with the fure / feather thing.
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