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Offline Raz

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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #45 on: May 17, 2013, 12:25:46 pm »
Well, Grim was disapproved of by everyone, so I guess you guys can scan Prophet. But like I said, I don't really have a lot of experience with campy and humorous. My writing has always trended hard towards the more serious.

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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #46 on: May 17, 2013, 12:35:04 pm »
Cool! It'll be good for you and challenging for you to write in a different style then. That's awesome!

I'm also looking forward to the challenge this RP poses.

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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #47 on: May 17, 2013, 12:39:08 pm »
Well, Grim was disapproved of by everyone, so I guess you guys can scan Prophet. But like I said, I don't really have a lot of experience with campy and humorous. My writing has always trended hard towards the more serious.

Well, honestly, dark, tribal tatoos, trench coat  and mysterious power is all very.... well... it was the RP character I liked to do when I was 13 dude.
« Last Edit: May 17, 2013, 12:43:24 pm by eropS »
No, no, he did. In the everything else section, at least. Officially, this makes him king.

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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #48 on: May 17, 2013, 01:33:32 pm »
So now you're going to be condescending in an attempt to piss me off? Who made you the GM of this RP?

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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #49 on: May 17, 2013, 01:37:11 pm »
Whatever spaz, you asked and I answered what I thought of him.
No, no, he did. In the everything else section, at least. Officially, this makes him king.

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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #50 on: May 17, 2013, 02:08:45 pm »
Yeah chill out Raz. Erops is right, your first attempt looked like something out of a highschooler's notebook. He wasn't particularly rude about it. Just accept criticism in a good natured manner  ;)
Sam is basically right, he's just cranky.

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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #51 on: May 17, 2013, 02:21:20 pm »
Or I can shove it up his ass for giving it like a douchebag. I write what I feel flowing, and I don't judge what I feel.

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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #52 on: May 17, 2013, 02:27:28 pm »
The fact you can't take a step back and accept criticism to your own creations just shows how immature you are btw. Why are you taking it so personally? Have I wronged your existence in some way? No? Then whatever, peace.
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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #53 on: May 17, 2013, 02:30:27 pm »
Okay, hands up, who doesn't want to deal with this bull**** again?  Raz has never shown any interest in being civil or improving as a writer, and brings nothing to the table to compensate for these deficits.

If he's not willing to play ball, I don't see why he should get a turn at bat.
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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #54 on: May 17, 2013, 02:32:02 pm »
I agree. Raz you don't get to play. Sorry!
Sam is basically right, he's just cranky.

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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #55 on: May 17, 2013, 02:41:06 pm »
Telling me I write like a 13 year old is being a ****ing douchebag. I don't consider that **** being civil. That's being outright insulting. How about I say all of you write like ****ing children, that your **** is ****ing lame and uninspired? Yeah, don't you all just love that "criticism"? I don't take **** from anyone, you guys should realize that by now.

I don't take kindly to people insulting me, never have, never will.
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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #56 on: May 17, 2013, 02:46:24 pm »
We do realize it.  That's why we're asking you to leave.  Being an uncompromising ******* isn't actually an endearing quality.
Nefarious?  Nearly.  Ne’er-do-well?  Never!  Neither nearly names this narrator.  Naive and knowledgeable, notorious and inscrutable, this nascent Nero is known naturally as Neoadept.

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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #57 on: May 17, 2013, 02:50:41 pm »
And a pack of insulting, elitist dickheads isn't what I want to collaborate with.

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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #58 on: May 17, 2013, 02:54:14 pm »
See. Right there. That's the problem. A criticism to you becomes an insult and you become defensive. It's not personal, stop acting like it is. Take a step back from your work, because once you post it, it's not yours anymore its the forums, and the forum can say whatever it wants (as long as it isnt porn or some other bannable offense). The same is done in all creative works.
No, no, he did. In the everything else section, at least. Officially, this makes him king.

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Re: The Lesbian Pulp RP OoC
« Reply #59 on: May 17, 2013, 03:09:22 pm »
Your logic is faulty. The forums are not a person. It is an assembly of bits being transferred from computer to computer. It does not have ownership of anything. It especially does not have ownership of what I have written. It is personal because you are taking the time to sit down, and insult me as a writer, to insult my ideas and thoughts and feelings. That is a direct insult of me. I am secure enough in my writing that I do not feel that either of those two characters are inadequate or poorly thought out.

You can tell how much more work I put into what I create compared to yours, considering how short almost all these character bios are. I develop my creations, consider links, motives, and so on. What have you done? Thrown out a sheet, which is not only short, but also contains typos, as if you didn't really take the time to read through it again and again. Oh, a nerd who was entrapped by accident in some apparent conspiracy that is somehow sourced in all of the museums of the world. That too is so original, so well thought out. It's a stroke of pure genius.

You don't see me going around belittling everyone's creations, and believe me, I don't like a few of them. But I'm keeping my opinions to myself. You, however? You choose to present them in a direct insult to me. You choose to say I write like a thirteen year old who doesn't have a ****ing clue how to truly write. That, to me, is insulting. You could have easily taken the time to present your opinions in a less offensive and concise manner, perhaps you could have talked about what you liked, mentioned what you didn't. But no, straight to the insult. Whatever.