Now, do not take this wrong. I mean this as nicely and as politely as I can while still being equally blunt about it.
Not much of anybody is going to take this seriously. I started my Photos like this and got damn near laughed out of the park. If you're just messing around and stuff, then fine, all the more power to you.
But if you intend to roleplay with a race or something, it'll have to have more depth than this.
I would be happy to help you format your posts into better english, do some drawings, whatever you'd need help with.
But again, and I mean this as politely and as kindly as possible, nobody's really going to take this seriously. I know it's in the Spore section, but for the Creation Corner and Roleplay sections, take everything Spore related and chuck it out the window.