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The Yauri, my first creature
« on: September 06, 2010, 11:32:15 am »
The Yauri




Threw this together with a few questionaries:

Name:  Yauri (YAR-ee)
Scientific Name:  Facicurus Sapiens

Type: Warm-blooded hexapedal terrestrial Vertebrate
Lifestyle: Social Omnivore
Habitat: Open Plains
Size: 1.1 - 1.2m tall (3.6-4ft tall)
Weight: 70 - 85kg (154 - 187lbs)
Diet: Small aquatic creatures, small terrestrial creatures, fruits, seeds, leaves, roots, eggs, insectoids and
Meat/Flora diet Ratio: 43% Meat/ 57% Flora
Hunt/Forage Success Rate: 50% hunt, 75% forage
Armor: Skin is supple, weak and elastic make armour out of pelts and woven flora
Defenses: Kicking and punching with its legs and arms
Weapons: No real natural weapons but use technology.
Tools: 2 hands on middle pair of limbs, two thumbs and two fingers
Method of Eating: Grab using hands then put food into beak situated between the first pair of limbs
Lifespan: About 50 - 70 years
Reproductive Rate: Reaches sexual maturity at 14, can reproduce anytime of the year
Gestation: nine months then live birth to a baby
Offspring incubation: Must feed off of pred-digested (Vomit) food for 10 months.
Number of Offspring: 1 - 2 , occasionally twins or even rarer triplets
Offspring Survival Rate (before age of maturity): 90% because of the low breeding rate a child is intensely protected


(Section 1 -- Biology)
Type                 : Terrestrial
Appearance           :  kind’ve Mammalian, Look at the picture
Gravity preferences  :  9.8 -10 m/s2 or standard
Temperature pref.    : 2 to 20 °C
Atmosphere breathed  : Oxygen/nitrogen
Body cover           : plain old soft elastic skin
Body color           : range from deep purple to sky blue
Hair                 : none
Hair color           : none
Eyes                 : two, small, solid eyes
Eyes color           : black
Body characteristics : look at picture
Diet                 : omnivore
Sexual reproduction  : two
Reproduction method  : live birth
Limbs pair n° 1 : legs
Limbs pair n° 2 : Arms
Limbs pair nº 3: legs
Mass :  70 - 85kg (154 - 187lbs)
Size :  120 - 150cm tall (4 - 5ft tall)

(Section 2 -- Culture)
Attributes:
  Militancy       : 10
  Determination   : 10
  Racial tolerance: 10
  Progressivness  : 10
  Loyalty         : 10
  Social cohesion : 11
  Art             : 10
  Individualism   : 11
  Body            : 12
  Mind            : 10
  Speed           : 9
  Lifespan        : 30 - 40 years (Primitive ages) 80 - 100 years (modern)
  Tech level      :2

(Section 3 -- Government and Religion)
Government type   :  after racial unification, representative democracy lead by an elected prime minister
                                  Before, a large variety of government types
Religion          :  Honor of the perfect fifth element (Their deity) and the three prophets. Each prophet formed his own take on the old religion.
Devotion          : Good

(Section 4 -- Extra things you should know)
Manual Dexterity
Warm blooded biology



(Section 1 -- System)
Star: Tiahuanacu
Star Type: yellow, medium
Planet #1: Apaec, smoldering rocky planet, smallest planet, no moons
Planet #2: Accla, greenhouse planet, third smallest planet, one moon
Planet #3: Viracocha, habitable world, second smallest planet, one moon called Si, diverse biosphere
Planet #4: Punchau, Gas giant, largest planet, twelve moons
Planet #5: Iyapa, Gas giant, Second largest planet, eight rings, nine moons
Planet #6: Thonapa  Gas giant, third largest planet, two rings, six moons
Planet #7: Khuno, Fourth largest planet, ice giant, three moons

(Section 2 -- Terrain and Atmosphere)
Size: About the same size as Earth
Gravity: 1g
Average Temperature: Mild
Liquid: Oceans of liquid water
Land-Liquid Ratio:  ~70% Oceans, 30% Land
Average Terrain: No average terrain, similar to earth
Continents: 5: Uku Pacha, Hana pacha, Kay Pacha, Huaca, and Urcuchillay + massive northern ice sheet
Density:  average
Composition: Nitrogen, Oxygen, Ozone, Carbon Dioxide, Xenon
Length of Day: 24(In Earth Hours)
Length of Year: 368(In Earth Days)

(Section 3 -- Life)
Main Species: Yauri
Native Animals: Immense biodiversity
Imported Animals: none
Native Plants: Massive biodiversity, mainly bony plants
Imported Plants: none

(Section 4 -- Development)
Structures: tents and simple villages
Urban: less than 1%
Spaceports: none
Imports: none
Exports: none
Capital: none

Also if your interested in the wildlife of Viracocha: http://s1.zetaboards.com/Conceptual_Evolution/topic/3120901/1/
More to come and I'll shrink these pictures

enjoy
« Last Edit: October 21, 2010, 05:56:22 pm by lemming98 »



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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #1 on: September 06, 2010, 11:39:46 am »
Not bad, not bad.
Just out of curiousity, is the picture with the black human figure next to it supposed to be a size comparison? Cuz if it is, your data is off. If they're 5-6 feet tall they would be about as tall as a modern human. So yeah...other than that, seems pretty solid. Lookin forward to more!

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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #2 on: September 06, 2010, 11:40:54 am »
Good to see you posting in here and great to see some nice creature stuff!

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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #3 on: September 06, 2010, 11:41:48 am »
*snicker* Yuri...

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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #4 on: September 06, 2010, 11:45:44 am »
Fixed the height

Whats Yuri, do I want to know?

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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #5 on: September 06, 2010, 12:06:36 pm »
lesbian stuff, crazy mind-control loving Russian in Red Alert 2
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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #6 on: September 06, 2010, 12:43:52 pm »

planet system
Third planet form their sun is Viracocha


map off Viracocha



Biome map
Light Green: Jungle
Similar to Earth, with huge biodiversity of flora and fauna. Flora dominated by huge red cage trees.
Dark Green: Cold Forest
Mainly Purple plant with the occasional Cage tree
Yellow: Savanna
INcludes splotland aswell as huge matts of Pinosteo flora and tanglecover.
Cyan: Mountains
SImilar to Earth, Scraggy cliffs dotted with purple plants and step trees
Gray: Tundra
Only Hardy Purple plants survive these freezing barren deserts
Purple: COld Grassland
Only Purple plants such as Furry stalagmites, wirrlygig trees and pinosteos ground cover
Orange: Desert
Very similar to Earth in that little plant life exists, mainly the occasional splot or tanglecover plant
Light Purple: Bridge Forest
A rare biome only in the northern island chain between Hana Pacha and Kay Pacha where the cage forests have grown over the ocean and formed bridges between the Islands. THese ISlands are shallow in the water but very close together as a land bridge between the continents is forming very rapidly. This is a lush biome with both unique aquatic life seeking the dropping fruit, and large aboreal forms.
LIme Green: Hanging Garden
A unique Biome defined by huge pillars of eroded mountains which have been colonizedby enourmous virifungi that grow out the side and form platforms on which mini ecosystems inhabit.
Red: NEo-mediterranean
Similar to the meditteranean on Earth with Hardy Red and Purple plants.

EDIT:

River map:

These are the five major rivers
« Last Edit: September 06, 2010, 01:03:00 pm by lemming98 »

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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #7 on: September 06, 2010, 01:12:52 pm »
You're one of the best newbies I've ever seen. I mean, DANG, you really thought this through! More history plz?

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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #8 on: September 06, 2010, 04:15:19 pm »
but why is the planet so earth like? 3rd planet, from sun, similar geography. the map even looks like a map of earth with the continents moved a bit.

otherwise, good creature.
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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #9 on: September 06, 2010, 04:28:31 pm »
but why is the planet so earth like? 3rd planet, from sun, similar geography. the map even looks like a map of earth with the continents moved a bit.

Does it really matter? And besides, the only continent that resembles Earth is Kay Pacha, which vaguely looks like a distorted Asia.

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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #10 on: September 06, 2010, 04:30:33 pm »
Starships, thats what I want to see.
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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #11 on: September 06, 2010, 04:46:35 pm »
Starships, thats what I want to see.

(Section 4 -- Development)
Structures: tents and simple villages
Urban: less than 1%
Spaceports: none
Imports: none
Exports: none
Capital: none

I think that the Yauri are still in the Ancient Age, maybe at the beginning of the Classical Age (ancient Greeks level, hence "Classical"). Can you clarify, lemming?

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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #12 on: September 06, 2010, 06:15:20 pm »
Well, I didn't know what to put for development as i plan to go from stone age to Galactic age like the Nauceans.

EDIT:  This is a primitive Yauri hut:

Kind of distorted, thats my limited art skills right there

Yauri Skeleton

As you can see there are no bones in the first pair of legs, only muscle

Sorry its so earth-like
« Last Edit: September 06, 2010, 07:14:40 pm by lemming98 »

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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #13 on: September 06, 2010, 07:18:22 pm »
It doesn't matter if it's Earth-like. Nauceanica is Earth-like, and that's no bad thing. The Nauceans have skeletons and houses. Is that Earth-like? It depends on your viewpoint, but doesn't affect the quality of your creature.

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Re: The Yauri, my first creature
« Reply #14 on: September 06, 2010, 07:30:32 pm »
It's a lot better than most organisms on this board. Looking forward to more biota.