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My First (Yes! First.) Race
« on: July 16, 2010, 12:48:48 pm »
The...

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Enginnered Fuel Creatures!

(Section 1 -- Biology)
Type                 : Aquatic
Appearance           : Otherworld
Gravity preferences  : 0 g (They are as dense as their environments, so they seem to float
Temperature pref.    : Cool
Atmosphere breathed  : Nitrogen/Ogygen/Hydrogen
Body cover           : Soft-skinned
Body color           : Pale pink, crisscrossed with red and blue membranes
Hair                 : None
Eyes                 : No eyes, but the entire body is coated with a light-sensetive chemical
Diet                 : Solar Powered
Sexual reproduction  : Asexual
Reproduction method  : Live birth
Limbs pair n 1 : No limbs, but it can manipuklate it's body shap to make pseudo-limbs
Mass :  1 kg
Size :  20 cm

(Section 2 -- Culture)
Attributes:
  Militancy       : 20 (Incapable of reasoning due to lack of intellegence)
  Determination   : 5
  Racial tolerance: 0
  Progressivness  : 0
  Loyalty         : N/A
  Social cohesion : N/A
  Art             : N/A
  Individualism   : N?A
  Body            : 1
  Mind            : 0
  Speed           : 1
  Lifespan        : 20 years
  Tech level      : 0

(Section 4 -- Extra things you should know)
Special abilities:
Blind
Chemical communication
Cold blooded biology
Heavy sleeper
High fecunidy
Light sensitivity
Sealed system (albiet painfully)
Strange appearence
Universal digestion
Water dependency


Created by the Hyropeals, the Engineered Fuel Creatures are an advanced biofuel. They produce hydrogen gas, perfect for burning. This power is already used to power small parts of Hydrop, and the power grid is due for expansion.

Hydropeals (the dominant creature on hydrop)
Bold means done. Black means it's still pending. You'll have to find it yourself, don't know how to do hyperlinks.

Geography
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Cell Stage

  • Before the Beginning
  • 'Bubblies'
  • The First Life
  • Merged Beings
  • The First Multicellular Life
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Re: My First (Yes! First.) Race
« Reply #1 on: July 16, 2010, 01:12:54 pm »
If they float in their environments, they would still have a gravity preference.

Don't jellyfish?

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« Reply #2 on: July 17, 2010, 01:05:17 pm »
I need to know something, if they lack intelligence, then how did they get into space? Or is this pre-civilization... blob things?
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Re: My First (Yes! First.) Race
« Reply #3 on: July 17, 2010, 01:41:57 pm »
I need to know something, if they lack intelligence, then how did they get into space? Or is this pre-civilization... blob things?

They are pre-civilisation... blob things.

They're only growing. Give them 750 million years.

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Re: My First (Yes! First.) Race
« Reply #4 on: July 17, 2010, 05:57:30 pm »
Ah, that explains it. But they still need a good name...

Find the planet/system sheet, fill it out, give a name for their home planet, then use the home planet's name as their name. Example: my race's name is Galdeen, their planet name is Galieen.
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Re: My First (Yes! First.) Race
« Reply #5 on: July 17, 2010, 09:55:21 pm »
Good to see you've set up a creature thread, Holo. I'll keep tabs on this one.  :)

Good luck on the creature!  :)

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Re: My First (Yes! First.) Race
« Reply #6 on: July 18, 2010, 01:04:14 am »
If they float in their environments, they would still have a gravity preference.

Don't jellyfish?

Yes they do, but it is incredibly low. Jellyfish cannot move under earth like gravity (like on the beach). They only move if something is as dence as them, like water. If it is as dence as them, it would feel like 0 g.

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« Reply #7 on: July 18, 2010, 12:18:33 pm »
Just because it feels like 0g doesn't mean they don't have a gravity preference.

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Re: My First (Yes! First.) Race
« Reply #8 on: July 18, 2010, 12:32:28 pm »
They do have a gravity preferences, they prefere the seeming absence of gravity.

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« Reply #9 on: July 18, 2010, 12:46:18 pm »
Or they prefer a liquid environment. Those are two different things entirely, though I see the point you're trying to make. The two can be combined (a liquid environment and Zero G, for example a "space suit" filled with liquid), though they are not the same thing.

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Re: My First (Yes! First.) Race
« Reply #10 on: July 19, 2010, 02:43:14 am »
So, basically in the same way that astronauts use swimming pools to practice spacewalks?

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Re: My First (Yes! First.) Race
« Reply #11 on: July 20, 2010, 11:54:31 am »
Yes, like that.

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Re: My First (Yes! First.) Race
« Reply #12 on: July 21, 2010, 06:51:41 pm »
Nice! Be careful, though. My first try with the Pentekonterua was pre-civ, and I had NO IDEA what I was doing. Plan beforehand.
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« Reply #13 on: July 22, 2010, 07:16:43 am »
I believe I told you that when you first started up Oct.  As I recall, you disregarded my advice.
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« Reply #14 on: July 22, 2010, 12:37:09 pm »
Exactly. I learned the hard way. Don't do what I did!
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« Reply #15 on: July 22, 2010, 04:54:41 pm »
He already got great advice from a certain lovable someone ;)

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Re: My First (Yes! First.) Race
« Reply #16 on: July 22, 2010, 06:30:02 pm »
Eactly how long are you going to let these guys sit and "evolve"(I assume that you wouldn't RP with an unintelligent species.)? Because I don't think that you'll have much anyone to RP with then, unless you don't plan to.
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« Reply #17 on: July 24, 2010, 06:43:15 am »
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RP with an unintelligent species

Good idea! Know any RPs I can join?

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« Reply #18 on: July 24, 2010, 02:28:41 pm »
"An unintelligent species" means yours. What I meant was that the story would most likely be more of a safari with you playing as the animals and whatnot.

And there's no way you could plausibly RP with them any other way as if they are unintelligent they couldn't, presumably leave their planet.
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« Reply #19 on: July 24, 2010, 03:51:50 pm »
Kitkats right, you need a civilization that can at least go into space. Maybe include a just-developed FTL drive or not when you do your race's First Contact. Besides, you need a name for your race. We can't just call them blob things.
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« Reply #20 on: July 24, 2010, 04:25:32 pm »
Maybe we can call them Throgs.

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« Reply #21 on: July 24, 2010, 06:02:06 pm »
Nah, let the holographic manga-loving person decide.
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« Reply #22 on: July 24, 2010, 07:51:44 pm »
What?

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« Reply #23 on: July 24, 2010, 09:20:58 pm »
Holo-Manga

Holomanga.
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« Reply #24 on: July 25, 2010, 06:10:17 am »
Home System (the hydropeal's language has a lot of aa sounds)
(Section 1 -- System)
Star: Haagu 582
Star Type: Main Sequence Yellow
Planet #1: Laana
Planet #2: Hyaaga
Planet #3: Hydrop
Planet #4: Naat

(Section 2 -- Terrain and Atmosphere)
Size: Slightly bigger than Earth
Gravity: Slightly less than 1g
Average Temperature: Hot
Liquid: Oceans
Land-Liquid Ratio: 97% oceans, 3% Ice Caps
Average Terrain: Deep Sea
Continents: About 5 tiny islands and a small ice cap
Density: Dense
Composition: Oxygen, Nitrogen, Carbon Dioxide, Argon
Length of Day: 90 hours
Length of Year: 1 year

(Section 3 -- Life)
Main Species: Hydropials
Native Animals: Many primitive and advanced life forms
Native Plants: Many primitive and advanced life forms

(Section 4 -- Development)
Structures: Giant cement-like mounds with tunnels and farms inside
Spaceports: 5 on the surface, 1 in orbit
Imports: None
Exports: None
Capital: No single capital

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Atmospheric gasses: Nitrogen, Oxygen, Carbon Dioxide, Argon
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