« previous next »
Pages: 1 ... 5 6 [7] 8 9   Go Down

Author Topic: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -OLD THREAD-  (Read 6871 times)

0 Members and 1 Guest are viewing this topic.

Offline martyk

  • R-Type Force Pod
  • *****
  • Posts: 6678
  • Never underestimate the power of dolphin!
    • View Profile
    • Portfolio
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #90 on: July 09, 2010, 09:50:49 pm »
I just managed to put my finger on it.  Hydro, you're writing in the present tense.  The general convention for RPs is to do all descriptive text in past tense, like a book.
Logged
Quote from: Doctor Zay
Martyk is a handsome fish.
Quote from: Brandonazz
This dolphin is delicious.
Quote
<Sgore> Martyk, mentally I always picture you as like, our forums bartender.
<@Neoadept> I've always pictured you trapped in a tuna net

Offline Hydromancerx

  • Doom Space Marine
  • *****
  • Posts: 12139
  • Klaatu Barada Nikto!
    • View Profile
    • Sagan 4
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #91 on: July 09, 2010, 11:23:11 pm »
Quote from: martyk on July 09, 2010, 09:50:49 pm
I just managed to put my finger on it.  Hydro, you're writing in the present tense.  The general convention for RPs is to do all descriptive text in past tense, like a book.

Ok. I will try using past tense next time. Thanks for the pointers. Like I said I am not use to RPing so any suggestions is greatly appreciated.
Logged

Offline Huckbuck

  • Goddess of Phobos
  • *****
  • Posts: 5003
  • I still haunt this place from time to time
    • View Profile
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #92 on: July 10, 2010, 06:33:58 am »
That last post of yours was much better Hydro! :)

Bagder, why would your family bring loads of slaves to a party?
Logged

Offline Little

  • Crossbow Sharpshooter
  • *****
  • Posts: 2820
  • I'm a drunk...
    • View Profile
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #93 on: July 10, 2010, 11:57:32 am »
When is the game starting?
Logged
Quote from: Kenotai on October 15, 2009, 06:50:05 pm
The best person ever.  She should have won the Peace Prize.

Quote from: Razonatair on July 06, 2010, 12:40:38 pm
What? No full control over children? You do realize that some of us have particular plans for those children.

Offline Huckbuck

  • Goddess of Phobos
  • *****
  • Posts: 5003
  • I still haunt this place from time to time
    • View Profile
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #94 on: July 10, 2010, 12:17:14 pm »
Today or tomorrow.
Logged

Offline Badger Man 22

  • Mach Rider
  • *****
  • Posts: 4600
  • Music comes from the White House.
    • View Profile
    • My Scroll
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #95 on: July 10, 2010, 12:26:59 pm »
Quote from: Huckbuck on July 10, 2010, 06:33:58 am
Bagder, why would your family bring loads of slaves to a party?
Alphaeus likes money and takes every chance he gets to sell the slaves. Including parties.
Logged
Quote from: Neoadept
A good cat is like a rainbow... Hard to find, harder to reach, and surrounded by dead leprechauns

Offline Raz

  • H.E.R.O. Rescue Worker
  • *****
  • Posts: 3535
  • Glorious Leader!
    • View Profile
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #96 on: July 10, 2010, 12:29:16 pm »
Yes because people are totally there to buy slaves. If they want to buy slaves, they'll visit your place. You know, that's why you set up a business. So people come there.
Logged

Offline Huckbuck

  • Goddess of Phobos
  • *****
  • Posts: 5003
  • I still haunt this place from time to time
    • View Profile
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #97 on: July 10, 2010, 12:31:19 pm »
Bagder I think you need to do better then that actually in the RP-sense. The post just feels out of place and uninteresting. Also, I will not advise you on your actions in-game, but yes, bringing the slaves seems wierd.
« Last Edit: July 10, 2010, 12:33:26 pm by Huckbuck »
Logged

Offline Badger Man 22

  • Mach Rider
  • *****
  • Posts: 4600
  • Music comes from the White House.
    • View Profile
    • My Scroll
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #98 on: July 10, 2010, 12:41:23 pm »
Alphaeus is old and senile, all he knows is that there is alcohol and people there. That seems like a great place to sell slaves in his mind.
Logged
Quote from: Neoadept
A good cat is like a rainbow... Hard to find, harder to reach, and surrounded by dead leprechauns

Offline Raz

  • H.E.R.O. Rescue Worker
  • *****
  • Posts: 3535
  • Glorious Leader!
    • View Profile
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #99 on: July 10, 2010, 02:24:34 pm »
Don't making excuses, badger.
Logged

Offline Badger Man 22

  • Mach Rider
  • *****
  • Posts: 4600
  • Music comes from the White House.
    • View Profile
    • My Scroll
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #100 on: July 10, 2010, 02:30:03 pm »
Excuses are the waters upon which continents of lies float.
Logged
Quote from: Neoadept
A good cat is like a rainbow... Hard to find, harder to reach, and surrounded by dead leprechauns

Offline Raz

  • H.E.R.O. Rescue Worker
  • *****
  • Posts: 3535
  • Glorious Leader!
    • View Profile
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #101 on: July 10, 2010, 02:33:16 pm »
Continents don't float  :P
Logged

Offline Huckbuck

  • Goddess of Phobos
  • *****
  • Posts: 5003
  • I still haunt this place from time to time
    • View Profile
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #102 on: July 10, 2010, 03:03:31 pm »
Bagder I am serious, you really have to show that you can RP better then that if you want to be in on this. I give you until tomorrow because that is when the game starts.
Logged

Offline Badger Man 22

  • Mach Rider
  • *****
  • Posts: 4600
  • Music comes from the White House.
    • View Profile
    • My Scroll
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #103 on: July 10, 2010, 04:13:43 pm »
Dude, I'm still asleep. Whatever I'll fix it.
Logged
Quote from: Neoadept
A good cat is like a rainbow... Hard to find, harder to reach, and surrounded by dead leprechauns

Offline Hydromancerx

  • Doom Space Marine
  • *****
  • Posts: 12139
  • Klaatu Barada Nikto!
    • View Profile
    • Sagan 4
Re: Cunae ((Planning and sign-ups)) -Yet another civ game by Huckbuck-
« Reply #104 on: July 11, 2010, 01:12:06 pm »
Quote
Gemenons Gambling Hall A hangout considered brutish by most aristocrats, though popular among the middle class. The building also features a restaurant making Gemenons Gambling Hall a popular late-night hangout. It can also house suspisious business though, it is said that every other woman you see at Gemenons are seductresses with a knife hidden in their toga. This is also a place notorious for attracting those requiring the service of an assassin.

This is so awesome!  ;D
Logged
Pages: 1 ... 5 6 [7] 8 9   Go Up
« previous next »