I agree that the only thing I didn't like was the fact that you gave them names at the end.
Well, I had come up with names for them early in the character designing progress, and I thought it would be a shame to leave them unused. I'm still thinking about what the names should be in the English version, though, if I'm going to use them in the future. I might change them later. Anyway, towards the end of the comic I realised the characters' names hadn't been introduced to the audience yet, so I figured that if they were moving in together, they'd probably want to know each other's names at that point. But perhaps I'm wrong and it would have been cooler if they didn't even know such things as "names" existed or wouldn't have at least cared about such things. After all, they used to be lifeless and most likely nameless objects. I think Viglu, however, would have had a name even before he came to life, seeing that he used to be some child's favourite doll. I'm thinking that the creatures would have had some kind of a pre-conciousness even before they were brought to life, so Viglu might be able to remember what his beloved "master" used to call him. Horkkanen, however, would have come up with his name on his own, probably after he heard other people talking to each other by names. He would think a name would make his existence more acceptable, as if he belonged to this world now that he had a name. Though perhaps I made a mistake phrasing Horkkanen's question as "What is your name?" instead of "Do you have name?", for example. Because if he used to not have a name, it would make more sense that he doesn't automatically assume that everyone has a name.
Anyway, I think that what the names are isn't really as important as the fact they told each other their names, meaning that they were ready to get to know each other more. Flisch suggested that I could have even ended it after Horkkanen's question, before the characters told each other their names.
But it is what it is and I'm not going to change it now. Well, except for maybe the names, to make them sound better for an English audience. If anyone's got any suggestions, that'd be great.
In other news, I have indeed considered continuing this as a webcomic. I have thought quite a bit about the future plotlines, but I'm not sure if I'm ever going to find the time to make such large updates again. We'll see.
