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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #75 on: November 28, 2010, 01:16:55 am »
*imagines several mental images*


*feels squeamish*



So my suspicions were right...

Though, I did originally think that the dead baby theme only applied to the Agnasi-Hnangha symbiotic system.



Zombies, mutilations, dead babies, and naked molerats...

Very twisted indeed...

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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #76 on: November 28, 2010, 05:19:29 pm »
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH my BRAIN!!!
Who are you again and why in the world would you expect anything resembling rationality or civility in youtube comments?

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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #77 on: December 14, 2010, 09:55:12 pm »
Niyames isn't quite the friendliest guy, despite being the 'protagonist" of the species. he come across as a "He Who Fights Monsters" type  (and we all love tvtropes, right? you fall into a "Time abyss". but I digress; that is my other race)

he was a King, and like most Larentili  kings ruled his subjects tightly, though not unjustly. Larentili lived in identical, modern community communes in his land. they were well taken care of, however, and it was far Superior to the mud and trees that most lived in.
after the corruption of the world, they had to abandon their cities. it is imppossible to leave the jungles now, because the contamination would burn their skin off. So the torture is that they are within miles of salvation through technology (i.e. spacecrafts to get off the toxic rock) and are unable to reach it.
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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #78 on: December 15, 2010, 01:46:59 am »
Well, that was, kinda cruel...   :-\



Not to mention utterly sadistic...   :(






and we all love tvtropes, right?

Must... Resist...

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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #79 on: December 30, 2010, 01:46:49 am »
Do you think death is lesser for others? They are apart from you, but not me. They all end the same
Do you think death is lesser for the enslaved? Trapped in pain, it is the directive. They all end the same.
Do you think death is lesser for the remainders? No respite from the folley, safety from themselves. They all end the same
Do you think death is lesser for him? He clings at its edge, fading through it and back unwilled. They all end the same
Do you think death is lesser for me? The countless times and kinds, I have felt them all. They all end the same.
But there is no death with us. our deaths have been had. they all end the same.
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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #80 on: December 30, 2010, 03:20:34 am »
The Wombship is mad at Agnasi?

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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #81 on: January 01, 2011, 04:49:50 am »
the Agnasi-Hnangha symbiotic system

Hardly symbiotic. neither really is benefiting at this point. though if you had to pick a winner, it would be Agnasi, seeing as Hnangha seems to be the only thing keeping him alive. after all, thats what Hnangha was built for, long before it was given that name. it was Agnasi's life support. Machine 1.

The Wombship is mad at Agnasi?

well...
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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #82 on: January 01, 2011, 05:09:31 am »
More like a quarrel between partners?

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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #83 on: February 12, 2011, 12:55:41 am »
I realized I can really say any more about them without spoiling the plot. bleh, and I have so many ideas, things to introduce and subsequently kill off.

also, worms. lots and lots of worms.
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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #84 on: March 05, 2011, 10:20:39 pm »
the word 'Iavolg' has changed definitions several times. first it meant an invalid. in post-industrial times, many Larentili took up residence amongs the expansive, sprawling train network. the name fell to them. it's come to refer to stowaways, worthless slaves, and all many of gutter swimmer.

the theme was always the same; stupid, low class, and dependant. Perfect for the mindless infants born of rotting metal.
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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #85 on: March 11, 2011, 09:07:11 am »
Yo, Crazen, have you ever considered making your personal world building project?

Your creatures make excellent templates for a poetically driven universe.  :)

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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #86 on: March 25, 2011, 06:41:18 am »
Pretty kewl!  ;)   Nice story line...
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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #87 on: March 26, 2011, 08:03:12 pm »
Thank you. it's a work in process.
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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #88 on: March 30, 2011, 05:01:41 pm »
so its about time I introduce these to the galaxy proper.

though I can't see how I am supposed to market a story about a salamander chasing a spider through a glue factory.
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Re: The Iavolg, of Agnasi
« Reply #89 on: April 13, 2011, 10:23:26 pm »
he's called the blood eater because his diet consists entirely of infant's blood. it is extremely low in nutrition, so he can go through over a hundred carcasses a day.

supplying Agnasi is the main reason for Hnangha's conquests.
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