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Offline GroxGlitch

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First Person Comic Idea
« on: December 31, 2009, 08:05:03 pm »
This is an idea I had. It's a comic from a first person point of view, from a character of one of my creatures. Check the poll to see what we are.



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Re: First Person Comic Idea
« Reply #1 on: January 02, 2010, 10:48:17 pm »
Ok...one frame at a time:

Time and space bends around the back end of a massive ship as it finishes emerging from a massive wormhole. This ship belongs to the Shadow, an evil, malicious empire bent on the total annhilation of all life that is not their own. The subject of our story is a particular Shadow, your every day soldier that, by some miracle, spearheaded one of the biggest events in the war....

((I'll have a second frame up later. P.S. Feel free to leave comments of any kind, so long as they are on topic.Even negatives are appreciated, but please be respectful. P.S.S. This is one of the "Situation Frames", one of the few that are not in the First Person.))

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Re: First Person Comic Idea
« Reply #2 on: January 02, 2010, 10:52:47 pm »
Cool!

Can't wait to control the guy. :)

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Re: First Person Comic Idea
« Reply #3 on: January 02, 2010, 11:16:35 pm »

Subject approaches a rienforced door, his destination being the room behind it:the Bridge. Leader Kari'u'Sadow had asked to speak to him in person, and he was about to face his great and terrible leader eye to eye. He swallowed hard. He had a knot in his stomach, and he felt as if he was going to vommit.

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Re: First Person Comic Idea
« Reply #4 on: January 03, 2010, 01:01:59 am »
Nice touch on the lights! :)

I reckon we'll get a HUD once we enter a suit?

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Re: First Person Comic Idea
« Reply #5 on: January 03, 2010, 11:14:22 am »
Nice touch on the lights! :)

I reckon we'll get a HUD once we enter a suit?
Well, the "subject" is in a "ship suit", which is armour that the Shadow wear around their ships so they don't have to slither around on the ground. They have a basic HUD, but they don't have munitions monitoring or any such combat HUD readouts, only comms channel readouts and the crosshair that all their HUD's use,to help line up shots if they use a handheld weapon. So yes, we will be getting a *better* hud once we get into battle armour.

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Re: First Person Comic Idea
« Reply #6 on: January 03, 2010, 03:42:06 pm »
Is anyone other than Yuu even interested in this?

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Re: First Person Comic Idea
« Reply #7 on: January 03, 2010, 03:46:02 pm »
I think it's cool, and everyone values my opinion very highly. Of course.

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Re: First Person Comic Idea
« Reply #8 on: January 03, 2010, 03:53:58 pm »

As you approach, u'Sadow begins to talk. He doesn't even move from his chair.
"You are going on a mission later today. There is a Photos outpost that is close to finding our main base in this universe. We will be launching an assault later, and you and your squad have proven to be ample shock troopers. We will be deploying you pre-assault to soften their defenses. Head down to the armoury to get your equipment." He says.

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Re: First Person Comic Idea
« Reply #9 on: January 08, 2010, 06:51:30 pm »
Can't wait to get in on the action! :)