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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #30 on: October 11, 2009, 03:46:25 pm »
Eh, its not really a last name. de Dsidum means he is/was Lord of the province of Dsidum (de-SEI-Dum).

I don't really have a last name for him :\
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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #31 on: October 11, 2009, 03:51:31 pm »
How was my first post?



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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #32 on: October 11, 2009, 03:52:28 pm »
A little short but otherwise ok.
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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #33 on: October 11, 2009, 04:14:58 pm »
Darn, Patman's post was so good, it made my post look like a pile of dung.



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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #34 on: October 11, 2009, 04:16:32 pm »
Pat's a vet. Don't feel bad. With practice, you'll be able to do the same :)

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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #35 on: October 11, 2009, 04:17:18 pm »
How was mine?
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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #36 on: October 11, 2009, 04:20:26 pm »
Everything looks good so far content-wise. I can nitpick and say that the first post in the RP could use some paragraph breaks but aside from that all is well.

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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #37 on: October 11, 2009, 04:55:34 pm »
Stupid question:  Eastern Kingdoms mentioned in OP=Eastern Lands in my bio?

Edit:  It seems that a couple people are from the east, actually.

I was thinking about the same thing, but I was going for a middle eastern descent in my bio. I think I'll change it so that he comes from the 'South' since it doesn't have to be the same as Earth's. Just know that he is of Middle Eastern descent (which you can kind of guess from the name).

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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #38 on: October 11, 2009, 05:04:39 pm »
Oh that's a good point to bring up. Since we're not on Earth words like "asian" and "middle eastern" have no bearing. They're fine to use in a character bio, you have to have some way to let us know how a person looks! But in the actual RP try not use words that "don't exist" in the RP world.

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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #39 on: October 11, 2009, 05:59:55 pm »
So, that means I'm the only one that is from the Eastern Lands proper. 

Also, boswell, double spaces between sentences.
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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #40 on: October 11, 2009, 06:02:54 pm »
Actually both methods are acceptable nowadays.

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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #42 on: October 11, 2009, 06:38:37 pm »
Yeah, but in the real world double spacing after every period costs more money; ergo, both are acceptable. ;D

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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #43 on: October 11, 2009, 07:23:10 pm »
Back on topic...

So, Is anyone going to post? I think this might be a good time for eropS to post.
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Re: A Brief Fantasy Adventure OOC
« Reply #44 on: October 11, 2009, 07:23:15 pm »
Name: General Omann

Age: 32

Bio: A gruff and burley bear of a man, General Omann gained his fame for his brute strength and ability to overpower his enemies, rather than his tactical strength. After the mysterious death of King Christopher IV, General Omann quickly swore his allegiance to Kyro de Dsidum, hoping to bring Carridia glory and plunder. When the King told his council of his plans for was against the East, Omann was overjoyed, at long last, war had come again. His weapon of choice is a huge war hammer, recently it has undergone a makeover, its silver handle being redone in a crimson and ruby coating.

Abilities: Brute.
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