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Zorikanians
« on: March 11, 2009, 11:35:23 am »
The zorikanians different strains evolved from parasites. Their homeworld, Voraisi is plain, except for a minni ice age.
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Planet

Composition:
Oceans: 90% ammonia 10% heavy water
air composition: 20% oxygen 80%C02
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Weapons

PR-70 sniper
It's a sniper. It fires lasers instead of bullets. Nuff said.
---Strains
Killer strain- hovers around battlefields with helium-filled organs. Normal soldier.

guardian strain-defends strategic points.

Leader strain- they lead squads, anything that any type of leader in RL would do,they do it.

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Their leader is chosen with a quest that all candidates must pass. The quest is as following:
First go to the north islands (the Zorikanians's version of north and south poles) by boat. Then, go
to the middle island, climb to the top of the highest peak, then come back down and be awarded with the Staff of Power,the zorikanian symbol of power. Then, go back to the largest continent (named Baribsisi)
to be awarded with leadership of the entire planet.
« Last Edit: March 11, 2009, 05:12:44 pm by pie »





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Re: Zorikanians
« Reply #1 on: March 11, 2009, 11:41:08 am »
These guys would be an easy target for an invasion. For the Traeponis, the Zorikanians would be pushovers. Remember, if your creation is an MS Paint/CC type thing, chances are they'll be very weak.

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Re: Zorikanians
« Reply #2 on: March 11, 2009, 12:08:33 pm »
I suggest you would let someone draw some pictures for you. As of currently the only thing im interested in is how the different strains evolved. How do they actually know not to eat each other? It cant be sentience cause they would have killed each other before it. Some sort of instincts or hormones?

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Re: Zorikanians
« Reply #3 on: March 11, 2009, 01:36:28 pm »
I suggest you would let someone draw some pictures for you. As of currently the only thing im interested in is how the different strains evolved. How do they actually know not to eat each other? It cant be sentience cause they would have killed each other before it. Some sort of instincts or hormones?
a scientific explanation would be that they allied eachother.
I'll work on evolution soon.
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Re: Zorikanians
« Reply #4 on: March 11, 2009, 03:10:51 pm »
You can't have liquid nitrogen oceans and an 80% carbon dioxide at the same time. Carbon dioxide causes global warming. And the oceans are liquid nitrogen in the middle of a miniature ice age? Yeah, right. Liquid nitrogen freezes at −346 F and boils at −321 F. According to that, the planet's temperature in the middle of a mini ice age is around negative 330 F. Change the oceans to normal water, please.
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Re: Zorikanians
« Reply #5 on: March 11, 2009, 04:41:51 pm »
It still causes global warming nonetheless. Try actually researching something before posting it, ya freakin' noob.

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Re: Zorikanians
« Reply #6 on: March 11, 2009, 04:43:22 pm »
Okay, okay I changed it. DON'T BE SCIENCE GUYS I'M A NORMAL KID OKAY? the oceans are now mostly ammonia with a touch of heavy water.
(if that's possible)
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Re: Zorikanians
« Reply #7 on: March 11, 2009, 04:45:10 pm »
And I'm a normal kid too, pie.
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Re: Zorikanians
« Reply #8 on: March 11, 2009, 04:55:08 pm »
HEY! STOP! Every time I try to be nice, you "shoot me down". What's up with that?



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« Reply #9 on: March 11, 2009, 04:56:05 pm »
*shame*
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Re: Zorikanians
« Reply #10 on: March 11, 2009, 04:56:37 pm »
If it's in a miniature ice age, then what's with the desert? There aren't supposed to be any deserts in an ice age, not even in a miniature one.

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Re: Zorikanians
« Reply #11 on: March 11, 2009, 05:01:54 pm »
Maybe you should share ideas with UFO King of Omegatripod to prevent errors. (If this is seen as rude I'm relatively sorry [I'm still VERY cheesed off with you insult to me earlier on, pie])
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Re: Zorikanians
« Reply #12 on: March 11, 2009, 05:13:05 pm »
Changed now  ;)



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« Reply #13 on: March 11, 2009, 05:24:33 pm »
Good, just for the future.
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Re: Zorikanians
« Reply #14 on: March 12, 2009, 10:29:24 am »
Deserts are places without vegitation or rain. Like a tundra, which is common in an ice age.


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