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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #1 on: January 28, 2009, 03:02:57 pm »
It's good.

I see you also want to be a writer when you grow up  ;D
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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #2 on: January 28, 2009, 04:09:59 pm »
*looks at updated threads*

what thread is this? mine? hot damn, someone actually read it!  :D
heh thanks, glad you like it...and yep, I wanna be a writer (as optimistic as that is)
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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #3 on: January 29, 2009, 02:51:13 pm »
So do I :P

COLLAB!  ;D
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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #4 on: January 29, 2009, 05:12:05 pm »
COLLAB!  ;D

come up with an idea, and I'm in!  ;)
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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #5 on: January 30, 2009, 05:56:18 am »
That was pretty much one of the most amazing story I've heard in a long time! Good job Operaghost21!

Edit: It was so amazing it made me bad at grammer!
« Last Edit: January 30, 2009, 05:23:53 pm by Grazony »

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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #6 on: January 30, 2009, 12:44:22 pm »
*blushes*
thank you!
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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #7 on: January 30, 2009, 09:41:19 pm »
I posted my stuff, but nobody commented on the first two.  :'(

I should repost here  ;D
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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #8 on: January 30, 2009, 10:16:59 pm »
I'll read them! where be they?
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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #9 on: January 30, 2009, 10:26:43 pm »
Should I post them in this thread?
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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #10 on: January 31, 2009, 12:11:58 am »
*reads story*

You got T.S. Eliot in my Sci-fi! :P

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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #11 on: January 31, 2009, 11:02:24 am »
I know, I know...I just couldn't help it!

I threw in some biblical references, too...I felt the allusions just weren't overused enough  ;)
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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #12 on: January 31, 2009, 11:04:22 am »
References? More like full on plot points.  :P
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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #13 on: January 31, 2009, 11:22:50 am »
Wow! Pretty damn good!
No way dude, you're trolling me.

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Re: Short story of mine, if anyone wants a read
« Reply #14 on: January 31, 2009, 01:07:21 pm »
thank you!  :)

Should I post them in this thread?

where did you post them originally?
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