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Offline Insani99999

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The Orange Comic
« on: November 05, 2008, 07:41:17 pm »
My Gmod Comic! The Main storyline has started in the 3rd comic, but i only have 3 comics, sicne I started about 2 days ago.

This is the Comic Page:

http://www.drunkduck.com/The_Orange_Comic/

(first comics sorta random)

The 3rd comic is just an intro of something big...something freeman...



Offline Yannick

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Re: The Orange Comic
« Reply #1 on: November 05, 2008, 09:23:39 pm »
Let's hope these jokes will be better.

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Re: The Orange Comic
« Reply #2 on: November 06, 2008, 12:26:34 am »
I don't think they're jokes, i think he's trying to make the "comic" look serious.

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Re: The Orange Comic
« Reply #3 on: November 06, 2008, 07:22:18 am »
Internet comic - funny = fail
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Re: The Orange Comic
« Reply #4 on: November 06, 2008, 07:23:45 am »
Wow... stole the main character from Concerned.  Flows like a train wreck.  Too many abreviations.  Please, I don't want to be mean, but just no.  Stop now.
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Re: The Orange Comic
« Reply #5 on: November 06, 2008, 09:07:52 am »
Internet comic - funny = fail
That's not actually true. The problem here is that the comic is supposed to be funny, but isn't. There are some internet comics, which are not meant to be mainly funny, but are still awesome.
There is, of course, a difference between having a laugh with someone, and having a laugh at their expense

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Re: The Orange Comic
« Reply #6 on: November 06, 2008, 09:17:25 am »
The panels are too dark, so I can't really make out what's going on there. Besides that, I think I still wouldn't have any idea what's happening in the comic.

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Re: The Orange Comic
« Reply #7 on: November 06, 2008, 11:02:46 am »
go for another idea and plot. Not another combine spah.

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Re: The Orange Comic
« Reply #8 on: November 06, 2008, 11:08:24 am »
go for something completely different, like bicycling or mountain climbing.

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Re: The Orange Comic
« Reply #9 on: November 06, 2008, 12:00:35 pm »
i liked it ;P well to me it does not have to be funny but i like seeing comic makers try :P i make comics but i dont like to show people

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Re: The Orange Comic
« Reply #10 on: November 06, 2008, 09:26:12 pm »
go for another idea and plot. Not another combine spah.


Combine Spah?

Actually, this is just part of my small start-out plan, involving a certain 'incident'.

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Re: The Orange Comic
« Reply #11 on: November 07, 2008, 01:49:02 pm »
I have no idea what's going on...
No way dude, you're trolling me.