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500: Chapter 1: The Stranger in White
« on: September 05, 2008, 06:26:53 am »



So you've finally decided to learn about it, yes?

This story is about three great heroes who traveled in the land between dark and light...




And it all began a long long time ago, in a land under the sun...


Chapter 1: The Stranger in White





A dazzling explosion of light bathed the nearby hills as a large sphere of bright energy crashed into the ground at an unimaginable speed.

A great sound, like that of the turbulent sea, echoed across the nearby area.




From a distance, we can see someone emerging from the point of impact.




It seems to be a young fair-skinned man with gray hair wearing a white and blue outfit.

He is holding some sort of sphere in his right hand. The object glows with seemingly fervent heat.

A few moments later, we can hear a weak voice coming from the nearby woods. An aura of uneasiness fills the air.

The man, hearing the voice, turns his head towards the direction of the sound. But before he could make his way towards the nearby forest...




... he realizes that something was amiss in the distant horizon.

There seems to be a large fire behind the forest.




Hastily walking towards the direction of the voice, he proceeds to enter the forest with a sense of urgency.




Reaching deeper into the forest, the voice became stronger and stronger. By now it was clear that the voice was a man's, and it seemed to be calling for help.

A few moments later, a small silhouette could me made out from the distance.

When the man realizes this, he quickly runs towards the figure...




Revealing it to be a young man in ragged clothes.

Reaching the man in white, the young man stopped and caught his breath. From the looks of it, he has been running for quite some time now.

Finally catching his breath, the young man begins to speak.

"Bandits! Bandits! They're everywhere! They're raiding the village! Please! We need help!"

A few rustling sounds can be heard from behind the bushes. The galloping of horses can be heard in the distance.

The man in white stares intently at the young man for a few moments before speaking.

"I will help you. But under one condition..."


Chapter 1: The Stranger in White




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Re: 500: Chapter 1: The Stranger in White
« Reply #1 on: September 05, 2008, 01:02:01 pm »
Pure awesomeness.

Love the unique use of powerpoint.  You really discovered an art resource there...
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Re: 500: Chapter 1: The Stranger in White
« Reply #2 on: September 05, 2008, 01:05:48 pm »
Your art is always fantastic Yuu.

I'll probably pop in here for a look-see from time to time.

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Re: 500: Chapter 1: The Stranger in White
« Reply #3 on: September 05, 2008, 02:07:10 pm »
yes, that is a special style you've got thar.

i like it.

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Re: 500: Chapter 1: The Stranger in White
« Reply #4 on: September 20, 2008, 03:32:33 am »
Gee thanks guys! ;D :D :)

Oh, and sorry for not being much active in the past weeks. I was down with a serious case of Spore. >_>

Well anyways, hope you guys like my update, which I'm currently making and will be ready by the next few days. :)

For anyone who's wondering how this game will work, I'll probably post the necessary stuff as we go along with the story and encounter new things. I'll most likely have the basics by Chapter 3 or 4. :)

That's where the game really starts to kick in. ;)