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Offline Neoadept

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MACHINA - A webcomic
« on: July 01, 2008, 02:38:39 pm »
Heh, I bet when some of you saw "MACHINA" you though it was that rp I've been talking about.  Nope, this is a webcomic.

I hope to update this at least twice a week.  It will be put together in "books," as in each section will have a cover page and title but will probably never be put on paper.

With that, I give you the first two pages of MACHINA Book I, The Reluctant God.









Comments, criticisms, soul crushing mockery?

EDIT:  Hm, image quality is a little lower than I'd like, especially on that last panel.


Nefarious?  Nearly.  Ne’er-do-well?  Never!  Neither nearly names this narrator.  Naive and knowledgeable, notorious and inscrutable, this nascent Nero is known naturally as Neoadept.

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Re: MACHINA - A webcomic
« Reply #1 on: July 01, 2008, 02:44:08 pm »
Ummm... Your Comic's name looked alot like Machinima at first glance. That's all I can say.
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Re: MACHINA - A webcomic
« Reply #2 on: July 01, 2008, 02:46:16 pm »
I'm curious to see what will happen next. It is a reluctant god... that means there will be room for hilarity and/or awkwardness.

Good work! :)

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Re: MACHINA - A webcomic
« Reply #3 on: July 01, 2008, 03:10:20 pm »
Interesting sentiment. I like it.

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Re: MACHINA - A webcomic
« Reply #4 on: July 03, 2008, 07:47:03 pm »
Kinda similar to "Too Human" eh?

I'll keep my eye on this one. Depending on how it goes, this might make a great setting for other things.

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Re: MACHINA - A webcomic
« Reply #5 on: July 03, 2008, 09:06:12 pm »
looks good
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Re: MACHINA - A webcomic
« Reply #6 on: July 03, 2008, 09:29:12 pm »
His name's not John, is it?  Looks good so far.