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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #150 on: September 18, 2008, 02:45:47 pm »
Wow just read it all that was long... So it seems now a big meeting of all races and factions should occur, that should be intersting. I'm ready to go :).

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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #151 on: September 18, 2008, 03:05:26 pm »
I totally forgot that i had three parties present in this RP. Seems like i was trying to hog some attention.

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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #152 on: September 18, 2008, 03:13:51 pm »
I totally forgot that i had three parties present in this RP. Seems like i was trying to hog some attention.

Lol well two of them were made by others so that's ok. Besides most of us represent at least two factions. In fact come to think of it I represent three as well: Daniyu, Priestess La-Ko, and the Thoons :) (The the priestess is pretty powerless by now after the "past 10 years" things).

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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #153 on: September 18, 2008, 03:21:47 pm »
I totally forgot that i had three parties present in this RP. Seems like i was trying to hog some attention.

Lol well two of them were made by others so that's ok. Besides most of us represent at least two factions. In fact come to think of it I represent three as well: Daniyu, Priestess La-Ko, and the Thoons :) (The the priestess is pretty powerless by now after the "past 10 years" things).

Lots of different factions! But they all come together to form an interesting story.

After skimming the story (i didn't reread the entire thing but i did look it over) the HC appears to be largely decapitated. This could really turn into a huge skirmish over who gets what and how thats done. At this point there are two huge rebel movements, the HC itself, and a large group of people combating the HC from the outside. I almost think that this deserves a new thread with a title like 'New Beginning' or something like that. It would be true for the story and the overall spore RP section...

But we could always keep it in here too. It just seems a little messy though.

I also think it would be interesting to create a history of the overall 'union' thing or maybe just the spore RP section in general. It would take a lot of work, but i think it would be interesting.

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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #154 on: September 19, 2008, 11:08:37 am »
I think that we should create a thread for refrence ofthe overall RP galaxy history, and then use that as a refrence and a starting point, (after the resolution of this thing)

Edit: just had a little look around, there is alot of stuff to do if we were to write it, i suggest we start making a list of alliances and then wars, then any oither major events and then creatures involved in any of the above three. We can them accordingly and start using te timeline and fanfic index to chronolize and comile some history.
« Last Edit: September 19, 2008, 11:19:21 am by munchkin5 »

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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #155 on: September 19, 2008, 11:17:43 am »
Wow, this is even one of our shortest RPs, and that reading took some time! :O

Balth, do you want the honours, or shall I?

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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #156 on: September 19, 2008, 01:05:38 pm »
here is a revised and condensed histroy of the war so far for refrence and use in the new thread:
-Austians split from the union in the wake of a civil war
-high command takes power of the union
-student riots and rebel movements breakout across the union, especially the planet of banaquaq
-a combined arkibal urshan and thoon fleet begin the assault on banaquaq
-fighting grows to a stalemate on the surface of banquaq and forces withdraw
-the high command now has a hold on the central union states
-arkibals urshans and thoons all suceed from the union and the northern forthi mandate stregthens it's borders
-negotiations start with high command, urshans face a swathe of refugees entering the empire
-the urshans agree with high commands proposals to an extent, but relations remain strained
-the zakraa succeed from the union and declare an offcial state of war
-HC begins conquering free forthi provinces
-10 years pass with the H.C crumbling
-a flimsy reformation of the union with a combined HC and Urshan parliment is formed
-election are held although many believe them to be a shambles and a fix
-cortan and the thoon-arkibal alliance begin moblishing against the H.C
-arguments over the harbouring of H.C oppossers the high price cortan and Yunamii by the urshans break out btween the H.C and the urshans
-arkibals and zakraa form a plan to undermine the currupt H.C regime
-yunammi, cortan and tussad discuss a possible attack on high command independat of the arkibal and zakraa plan
-the forthi begin annexation of occupied territories
-a pact is proposed with the free forthi by the zakraa
-arkibals withdraw from their political war anfd begin mobilising their milatary
-resistace groups begin strengthening across H.C space
-the Arkibal high milatary commander begins his campaign in the southern provinces
-an influential forthi radio presenter, ninel, become a power figure for the forthi liberation movement
-fighting erupts on vii duex and cortan begins his guerilla campaign
-urshan emeror daniyu adresses the liberation movements with support
-the urshan emperor turns his nation into a democracy independant of the H.C and offers his personal apperance to aid rebel forces, and declares war on the H.C
-while talks go on within the high command of a better future bitter fighting in city streets across the union continues
-the H.C sees the inevitability of it's collapse and official peace talks take place to reform the union as the "free union"
« Last Edit: September 20, 2008, 08:04:25 am by munchkin5 »

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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #157 on: September 19, 2008, 01:17:29 pm »
The Austians split from the Union, you forgot that.
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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #158 on: September 19, 2008, 01:51:32 pm »
I'm out all Weekend....so the honour is yours, Daan.
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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #159 on: September 20, 2008, 03:58:07 am »
The Austians split from the Union, you forgot that.
at what point was that, i've got this info from the posts in this thread

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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #160 on: September 20, 2008, 04:35:56 am »
The Austians split from the Union, you forgot that.
at what point was that, i've got this info from the posts in this thread

It was literaly just before High Command took control, they had completely war torn worlds from their Civil War and they didn't want another one, so they left before the fire started.
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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #161 on: September 20, 2008, 04:48:36 am »
I started a new thread BTW.

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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #162 on: September 20, 2008, 08:04:48 am »
i edited that and posted in the new thread for my intro.

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Re: A Union Broken [RP]
« Reply #163 on: September 20, 2008, 10:27:51 am »
By the way awesome review Munchkin! Some is missing but all the important stuff are there and well organized. Great job :).