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Story: The end of the Tistans.
« on: August 08, 2007, 10:05:39 am »
The day was like any other day.... Hot and dry. Tyn Tovun Was Commanding a new Laser test. A weapon so powerful it can Detonate a planet. And it did. The thing that made it so great killed it. That was paperwork. A group of terrorists were Spying as Testers. They removed a simple file noting that the 7th tank was weak. When the Laser fired, The feul shot out and blew up with the force of a meteorite. A small chunk of the planet blew off, and the rest of the planet flew into the sun. No Alarm, No escape, No nothing. Today, The astriods float where the planet was. Paperwork made it great, Paperwork made it die.



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Re: Story: The end of the Tistans.
« Reply #1 on: August 08, 2007, 12:13:25 pm »
Nice idea, but short....or was that intentional in the 'Down with paperwork!' vein?
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Re: Story: The end of the Tistans.
« Reply #2 on: August 08, 2007, 02:15:25 pm »
Just getting rid of a race. :D
Also, The astroids have Cells in them If you want to Do an in-Depth race.